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Dark Zone: S-Wiser by PATVIT Dark Zone: S-Wiser by PATVIT
I tried my hand at drawing motorcycle. I call this the S-Wiser because of the S symbol and it wise AI that is installed on to it. This Bike belong to my character Vas who is the Commander of the First Elite Assassin Squad of the Organization known as ODAH.

It appear I'm getting better w/ using a ballpoint pen to draw. I'd really love to hear what you guys think about this since I'm gonna include it in my Manga. Please Comment I would really Appreciate it.

For this I use the TDM850 by Yamaha as a reference to learn how to draw a motorcycle.
The Tool are 2H pencil, Ballpoint Pen, and Manga Studio Debut.
You did this with a ball point pen? Incredible!
Rendering and technique is amazing.

1st- The body of the bike seems a little... squashed. Maybe check proportions?

2nd-Back tire is too small

3rd-From the straight down perspective, the back seems to be a little narrow to me

Overall: This is, as I said before, amazing. love the pen work. Watch the highlights on the tire and hubs, it doesn't match the rest as fluidly as possible

Now, I know you used a reference, and you took a lot of liscence with that, which is great. Love how you personalized the bike... just make sure you keep it functional/believable. Not much problem there, but since this is super realistic, you've got to make sure the proportions are realistic too.

All that being said, I'm still awed by this. 10x better than what I could do. keep it up man.
Note: Love the "S" design, very sleek
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Fernie11 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student Interface Designer
Oops-WrongUniverse Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
Very sleek!
(If I knew anything about motorcycles I would write a critique...) for now all I can say is, looks cool!
PATVIT Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Student General Artist
Well thanks you anyway for at least commenting on it, I appreciate it a lot.
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